It's adorable. Really and truly a sweet sort of thing. Ben really does have to have an incredible amount of patience to deal with Shanks The Great and Almighty Irritant.
The writing was good-- just the right amount of humor worked into the story in a very effective way. The lead-in let you move back into humor much more effectively.
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Date: 2004-07-04 01:05 am (UTC)The writing was good-- just the right amount of humor worked into the story in a very effective way. The lead-in let you move back into humor much more effectively.
I'm very impressed. This is nice. ^_^