Wandering around journals in the middle of the night is fun. Especially finding goodies like this. ^____^
I like it a lot, personally.
You write Ben so very well, and this is just a touching piece. There's just a bit of angst and melancholy-- just enough to satisfy the angst-bug that sits in the back of my brain and demands to be fed, but there's also that sweet little fluffy bit at the end that makes me go 'awww.'
I think you -should- put it on the site. It's nice.
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Date: 2004-06-02 03:33 am (UTC)I like it a lot, personally.
You write Ben so very well, and this is just a touching piece. There's just a bit of angst and melancholy-- just enough to satisfy the angst-bug that sits in the back of my brain and demands to be fed, but there's also that sweet little fluffy bit at the end that makes me go 'awww.'
I think you -should- put it on the site. It's nice.
-k.