15 is just... ;_; I'd never considered just how betrayed Zoro would feel by that kind of doubt but it makes so much sense. *feels the need to hug them both*
I liked 18 too, especially the last two lines. The nakamaship of even Zoro being worried for Nami is happy and the last line manages more forboding than should fit into 5 words.
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Date: 2006-08-29 01:48 am (UTC)I liked 18 too, especially the last two lines. The nakamaship of even Zoro being worried for Nami is happy and the last line manages more forboding than should fit into 5 words.