God I think your writing is getting better every time I read a new story. I loved how the swords were talking to Zoro (or is that Zolo XD). The Luffy touches it and you get the feeling that it’s talking to him. I loved that part. I also liked the thoughts that Zoro is having in the first story. I shows that he’s just starting to think about Luffy and doesn’t know what he thinks yet or that he’s in love. (now he just has to make sure Nami stays with Robin and Choper and doesn’t go after her love for Luffy also XD). Well have to get back to work. I’ll go over them with you letter when I see you. Love Love
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Date: 2005-10-26 01:08 pm (UTC)