Regarding the razor blade thingy...no he's just got it between his teeth. Although he's quasi thinking about actually pulling it farther into his mouth...I think...I can't really remember what I was thinking when I wrote that part.
As for repetitive...yeah, it is. Sigh. That's the problem with drunken writing...I get stuck on one thought ad nauseum.
And thanks for the compliment! I'm not that talented a writer at all, but I did manage to impress myself with how coherent this fic managed to be considering how wasted I was ^^
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Date: 2005-04-03 08:45 pm (UTC)As for repetitive...yeah, it is. Sigh. That's the problem with drunken writing...I get stuck on one thought ad nauseum.
And thanks for the compliment! I'm not that talented a writer at all, but I did manage to impress myself with how coherent this fic managed to be considering how wasted I was ^^