ext_178327 ([identity profile] serrende.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] dethorats 2010-09-28 08:53 pm (UTC)

icon is unnecessary!

I'll be unoriginal and second [livejournal.com profile] mirax noth on the effective final line and the great use of disturbing details, like the intestines - brr! - plus, I like the mention of a doctor. I never thought about it before, but it only makes sense that Franky would have dragged himself off to a doctor afterwards.

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