Observations - Thank you. It wasn't quite what I wanted and ended up being more UsoLu than anything but I think Robin will end up being more...open I guess is the word...like Nami became after Arlong Park. Oda's women all have such similar past circumstances that it KILLS me, esp. with how he's made them have to choose paths that the boys never had to consider. They're all so very strong because of it and I like the idea of Robin slowly blossoming and changing.

None - Yeah, Sanji would indeed get a nosebleed. And I need to write more NaChoRo with side of boy!orgy I think. Just need to get some inspiration.

Unmentionables - Ben has a hard life. But he chose it and there are some benefits I suppose. But yeah, Mihawk is a welcome dose of sanity. As for Luffy in ladies' underwear, I'd love to see that myself. XD "But Nami, what else am I supposed to swim in?"