Smoker making sure, more or less, that Tashigi was ok with getting dumped was sweet (For all that you can even call him sweet. I guess I should say he was being brotherly, as it sounds manlier.). And his mentioning that Jerran had been by often shows that not only has he realized that that’s something that would be meaningful to Tashigi, but that Smoker himself has been by often enough to notice Jerran there.
Oh, and I thought that Jerran and your other original characters (Merro, Thom, and Kenshiro) filled their roles well without becoming annoying or overbearing. (And it’s sad that I’ve come across so many horrible ocs that I feel the need to mention this.)
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Smoker making sure, more or less, that Tashigi was ok with getting dumped was sweet (For all that you can even call him sweet. I guess I should say he was being brotherly, as it sounds manlier.). And his mentioning that Jerran had been by often shows that not only has he realized that that’s something that would be meaningful to Tashigi, but that Smoker himself has been by often enough to notice Jerran there.
Oh, and I thought that Jerran and your other original characters (Merro, Thom, and Kenshiro) filled their roles well without becoming annoying or overbearing. (And it’s sad that I’ve come across so many horrible ocs that I feel the need to mention this.)